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1)
The food that I like.

Topic :  The food that I like
Topic sentences : My favourite food is Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC), because it's taste deliciouse and fried.
Supporting Details: I like to eat KFC because its good to ate with soft drink.
                                  many selection of menu and soft drink.
                                  fast food - no need to wait for a several time.
                                  presentation of the menu - they let their customer see the menu and
                                  explain about the menu.
                                  the restaurant is clean and friendly staff.
                                  the price is not really expensive and the servise is satisfied me.
 
Conclussion :          In conclussion, I like to eat KFC because it's taste is deliciouse, fried and
                                 spicy.

Linkers/ squences 

connectors used : Besides, other than that, firthermore, in addition.

                       
                                 My favourite food is Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC),because it's taste deliciouse and fried. I like to eat KFC because its good to ate with soft drink. Many selection of menu and soft drink in the KFC Restaurant. Besides, KFC is a fast food restaurant. Customers no need to wait for a several time until they are served, but customers just take a moment until their food is served. Then, customers can just sit at their choise seat to enjoy their food.
Other than that, presentation of the menu is good because they let their customers see the menu and explain about the menu when needed.  Furthermore, the staff will promote the new menu if they have the promotion on the day. I like to go to the KFC Restaurant because it is clean and friendly staff. The staff will greet their customers that come in to their restaurant with a smile. As a student, for me the price of the food is not really expensive. Customers are able to buy the food and let their customers enjoys the food. In addition, the place of the restaurant is strategic and easy to reach. In conclussion, I like to eat KFC because it's taste is deliciouse, fried, and spicy.





2)
Excercise to keep fit


Topic :  Excercise to keep fit.
Topic sentences : Doing an excercise everyday is important to maintain our health and to avoid from the desease.
Supporting Details: There are so many types of exercise that we can do to to keep fit.
                                  Walking – If the weather is nice, it’s wonderful to get outside     
                                 and enjoy the scenery around you while you exercise. However, if  
                                  the weather has other ideas, you can just as easily get an effective
                                  walking workout at home. If you have a flight of stairs, go up and down
                                 them a few times. (You could even grab a load of laundry as you’re 
                                 going   that way anyway!) This will help to tone up your legs, while 
                                  getting some low impact aerobic exercise as well. If you don’t have 
                                 any stairs available, just walk around the house a few times – it may not
                                 be very exciting, but it will do the job.
                                Jogging - jogging around our home actually a good excercise to keep fit.
                                makesure we use shoes so that we comfortable to move our body. its good 
                                to jogging at the morning and at the evening.
                                Dancing – Dancing is a wonderful exercise, which is great for your 
                               heart. Not only that, but it can lift your spirits as well, and give your
                               overall feeling a boost. its the good excercise for those who like to dance.
Conclussion :          In conclussion, do an excercise is good for our health to avoid from the
                                 desease.

Linkers/ squences 

connectors used :  However, other than that, not only that.




                            Doing an excercise everyday is important to maintain our health and to avoid from the desease. There are so many types of exercise that we can do to to keep fit. First, is walking. If the weather is nice, it’s wonderful to get outside and enjoy the scenery around you while you exercise. However, if the weather has other ideas, you can just as easily get an effective walking workout at home. If you have a flight of stairs, go up and down
them a few times. (You could even grab a load of laundry as you’re going   that way anyway!) This will help to tone up your legs, while getting some low impact aerobic exercise as well. If you don’t have any stairs available, just walk around the house a few times – it may not be very exciting, but it will do the job. Then, Jogging. Jogging around our home actually a good excercise to keep fit. Makesure we use shoes so that we comfortable to move our body. its good to jogging at the morning and at the evening. Other than that, dancing. Dancing is a wonderful exercise, which is great for your heart. Not only that, but it can lift your spirits as well, and give your overall feeling a boost. its the good excercise for those who like to dance. In conclussion, do an excercise is good for our health to avoid from the desease.