The common mistake that I always do in writing is I always mix the points and sometimes it became not arranged. Besides, I do not know how to put the adjective correctly. Other than that, I always use the american words. For me, writing in English is a little bit difficult althought I was study English subject in primary school and sit the subject in SPM Exam.
The suggesstion to overcome this problem is I must read a lot of grammar book, do more exercise in english and find where is the place of the adjective, subject and others.
Monday, 16 April 2012
writing process about water pollution.
Topic : Water Pollution
Topic Sentences : Nowadays, many pollution that happened in our place for example, water pollution and this pollution gives many negative impact to the place and people around our place.
Supporting Details : i. cause a lot of aquatic life to the dead
ii. cause the river and the sea is dirty
ii. the splendor of the river has been lost
Concluding Details : In conclussion, water pollution must be avoided so that the the splendor of the river and sea will return as before the pollution.
Nowadays, many pollution that happened in our place for example , water pollution and this pollution gives many negative impact to the place and people around our place. The first negative impact of the water pollution is cause a lot of aquatic life to die. Water poolution not only happen in sea but also happen in the river. Besides, river and sea became the trash disposal. A lot of aquatic died because of the rubbish. The aquatic cannot breath when many of rubbish around the space and in the water. Then, the pollution also cause the river and the sea is dirty. All the rubbish that people throw in the river and the sea are gather in a place then cause the aquatic cannot breath and cannot get the sun light. The sun light is very important to all that live in this world. Even a smallest life in this world, it still need sunlight. Other than that, when the water pollution happened it will cause the splendor of the river and the sea lost. The splendor of the river and the sea also one of the attraction of tourist from orther place, but when all of the splendor lost, there is no more attraction of tourist in our place. The calmness also can be ilustrated from the splendor of the sea and the river. In conclussion, water pollution must be avoided so that the the splendor of the river and sea will return as before the pollution.
Topic Sentences : Nowadays, many pollution that happened in our place for example, water pollution and this pollution gives many negative impact to the place and people around our place.
Supporting Details : i. cause a lot of aquatic life to the dead
ii. cause the river and the sea is dirty
ii. the splendor of the river has been lost
Concluding Details : In conclussion, water pollution must be avoided so that the the splendor of the river and sea will return as before the pollution.
Nowadays, many pollution that happened in our place for example , water pollution and this pollution gives many negative impact to the place and people around our place. The first negative impact of the water pollution is cause a lot of aquatic life to die. Water poolution not only happen in sea but also happen in the river. Besides, river and sea became the trash disposal. A lot of aquatic died because of the rubbish. The aquatic cannot breath when many of rubbish around the space and in the water. Then, the pollution also cause the river and the sea is dirty. All the rubbish that people throw in the river and the sea are gather in a place then cause the aquatic cannot breath and cannot get the sun light. The sun light is very important to all that live in this world. Even a smallest life in this world, it still need sunlight. Other than that, when the water pollution happened it will cause the splendor of the river and the sea lost. The splendor of the river and the sea also one of the attraction of tourist from orther place, but when all of the splendor lost, there is no more attraction of tourist in our place. The calmness also can be ilustrated from the splendor of the sea and the river. In conclussion, water pollution must be avoided so that the the splendor of the river and sea will return as before the pollution.
There are the writing process with an example in every stage of the writing process.
Topic : My favourite pets
Topic Sentences : my favourite pets is cat and puppy.
Supporting Details : i. cute and affectionate
ii. clean and grease
iii. my soul mate
Concluding sentences : For me, my favourite pets are the best and easy to be taken care.
Topic : My favourite pets
Topic Sentences : my favourite pets is cat and puppy.
Supporting Details : i. cute and affectionate
ii. clean and grease
iii. my soul mate
Concluding sentences : For me, my favourite pets are the best and easy to be taken care.
stages of writing process
There are few matters that must have in the writing process. The matters are as below
In the conclussion part, student no need to put a new idea, student just have to rewrite the sentences that have in the topic sentences. In addition, Topic Sentences must have only 1 sentence.
- Topic
- Topic sentences
- Supporting Details
- conclussion
- Linkers/Sequence Connectors use
In the conclussion part, student no need to put a new idea, student just have to rewrite the sentences that have in the topic sentences. In addition, Topic Sentences must have only 1 sentence.
Sunday, 1 April 2012
simple sentences, compound sentences, complex sentences, compound-complex sentences
> simple sentences
i. Josue and Mark like to eat apples. (with compound subject).
ii. Josue and Mark like to eat apples and mangosteen. (with compund subject and compound predicate).
> compound sentences
i. Josue eating an apple, and Mark eating an mangosteen.
ii. Josue is cute; otherwise, Mark is handsome.
> complex sentences
i. Martina is clever even though she is poor.
ii. Even though Martina is poor, she is clever.
> compound-complex sentences
i. Marcella is clever because she studious, but she is poor.
ii. Steven is popular because he is rich, but he is arrogant.
i. Josue and Mark like to eat apples. (with compound subject).
ii. Josue and Mark like to eat apples and mangosteen. (with compund subject and compound predicate).
> compound sentences
i. Josue eating an apple, and Mark eating an mangosteen.
ii. Josue is cute; otherwise, Mark is handsome.
> complex sentences
i. Martina is clever even though she is poor.
ii. Even though Martina is poor, she is clever.
> compound-complex sentences
i. Marcella is clever because she studious, but she is poor.
ii. Steven is popular because he is rich, but he is arrogant.
what is love to you?
Meaning of love is wide. Every human being will have a taste of love, whether love is in terms of friendships, relationships, family, and most importantly, feel the love of god.
Love in friendship felt when we respect each other friends. Love and care makes us feel happy and not lonely in this world, we feel that we always have a friend who can we trust and help us. In friendship, we must choose a good and reliable so that we do not feel the pain of love between our friends. The love between men and women, love can be felt when we always want to close with our spouse. It can be defined as a sense of deep longing and love for someone. Sometimes, when a man or a woman misses and falls in love with each other, they will express them with a sincere heart. we should appreciate the love, because love is a sign of happiness in relationships.
Love in the family is also very significant because the family love is the key element in building a happy family. Love in the family is very important because it brings love each member of the family united in doing any work and sharing joy and sorrow. We must be likened to our family as a close friend.
In all the love, the love of God is the most important, because all the love we feel for friends, family and each other is all from God. God never left us, because God also loves us. But as ordinary people, we often times forget the love of God, whose mood is dominated by free. Therefore, we must love God because God himself also loves us with great love. Therefore, for me love being able to complete with the love of God and one another in the true sense. it is an invaluable gift of feeling God.
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